Un dia yo paseaba en la playa de Peru. Yo paré a buena distancia de océano y miré la madrugada bonita, roja…
Derepente a lo lejos yo miré un salvaje. Estaba asustada, pero yo queria verlo cerca. El varón se aproximó, y yo púde revisar que el estaba bonito con alma inocente, pero poquito valeroso. El estaba grandaso y noventa kilos a peso. Yo vine de puntillos poquito cerca. Derepente yo estaba cabalgandolo. Varonaso estaba puramento rico a mi paladar. Además yo estaba inspisada con madrugada linda. Entonces yo me casé con el salvaje por si acaso.
Y solamente un cangrejo viejo pudo mirar la pareja

by ViktoryiaN
haciendo amor en la playa decierto…
Love this story very very much…
And the language is as rich as the writer´s mind..
Keep on maja kotika krasivaja umnja 4elaveka!!!
My adno vzde i vsgda!!!
Spasibo, ljubimyj! I wrote it just to see your smile!
Ohh que buena historia!!! Debo de pensar e imaginar q eso paso en asia no?? Creo que fueron unos buenos dias para todos nosotrosss!!! Y me parece bien que estes escrbiendo en espanol….!!
Oh,yeah! I do my little notes and speaches almoust cada dia! But still can´t speak spanish on daily bases… Actually it was my first historia romantica written. But may be some more stories will come mas tarde! hehe! It was fun to write it!
Asia was good! 😉
Q buena historia!! Me gustó la parte del “Salvaje” jajajajajaj
=)))
Hey!!! =) great that u are writing in Spanish, sounds like when a kid starts to write, sweet with mistakes but with a great idea.
Nice kip writng
And tell ur Marido to teach you the difference btw SER y ESTAR (to be)
Gina
Ladies! Thank you very much for visiting my page! I had lots of fun writing it! Of course if I listened to mi marido, I´d speak spanish fluently by now, but… 😉 So I used the words, incl. salvaje, I had in my notebook, no wonder it sounds like kid language. But my next story might come out soon! Ill try to do it even better!
linda la historia, lindo tu español(es exactamente como lo hablas)..pero hay algo q no entiendo… varonaso???? andqtk…!!! jajaja
HAhah! Right! Varonaso! When he´s with me he´s varonaso. But when he´s with you.. he´s Simon.. andqtk2…!!
fqn’s right… “varonasp” hahaha… “mariconazo” actually… LOL..
spanish is improving… good 4 u n ur “varonaso” haa.. ya pe juguete no sea graciosa pe’
Common, timetogetlaidwithSIMON (I think there was a mistake in your name,no? anyway…), be nice! I tried hard to write this piece of… smth!!
Keep your hands away from mi mariconazo, ooops ;), varonaso, I mean… We are married anyway, so it´s too late..
Very very impressive primita!!!! I wonder now why you guys were lost in Asia at times… mmmmm…. I’d like to thinkg of that option too!!! hehehehe Good job on your Spanish writing skills!! Way to go!!! 🙂
🙂 Yeah, the whole historia romantica was inspired by Asia!
We had great time there!
Miss you , primita! Take care! Check up my blog from time to time. May be I´ll get inspired for another romantic story…
Tak!! Vot ya i tvoi ispanskii uvidela:):) Ochen rada za tebya:)!!!
Da uzh… eto byl moj malenskij poryv. No po-ispanski ya poka osobo ne razgovarivaju.. 😦